Escape

[Immortal.]

watchu guys think?

[crazycata]

it need's a little more depth, and that line on the left, it has to go....

[-Junaid-]

hmm im feelin the c4d placement..however the tomb raider text needs changin imo..good work bro

[MadJakker]

link me to the font

the big one

nice job

[Papa]

V2 and blur the very left of the right side. It'll solve your depth problem and help draw your eye to the focal more.

TBh i'm not liking the text. I like your nasme, i like the tomb raider, but your getting hooked on that one font text. I don't like it. It doesn't work in this sig, it should be somethign sleek, something thin. Almost liek a serif font.

Nice c4d usage though the focasl is really LQ.
I love the flow in this one too. This is decent but not your best.

[donutman7]

Great flow and comp. Colors are good.Not feeling those small black lines drawing into the focal tho.