Very cool I like the way that you smudged it and the C4d's that you used, but it pops out too much from the BG, so you might want to erase a bit of the edges of the render. :P
The text is a bit boring and putting it in the corner doesn't look great. Your technique is nice and the clipping masks over the render look very cool, but the render isn't blended enough.

Good job, just blend in the render a tad more. :P