This is rpetty cool. Aces i love critiqueing your work because i never see anythign that's "the stye" i always see things way out of the ordinary but it's awesome.
V2 is better but i'd still liek to see a few c4ds back there just not as many, if that makes sense.
The text could sue some work it just doesn't fit right. IMO you should use fire eye or system or something rly sci-fi like.
Not bad overall though i love your sigs.