Heix please don't bump we don't allow it at gfxvoid, and if you give people time they will respond.

Overall it's not bad. But i think you need to work on the BG. everythign seems really mismatch and wobbly. It's not bad to have blank space. Minimalism is somehting that should be used in every peice IMO. You need more minimalism.

The flow, adding minimalism will also help the flow. Right now i see non as stuff is just coming from everywhere and really is too jumbled to make out.

The color combos dont work for me. There's just too much, greens reds, oranges yellows. Get a better color scheme and it'd help it a lot.