I think you just need a steadier hand. It's by no means horrible. Both drawings are a helluva lot better than anything I could scrape together. I like the texture on the heart... can't say much beyond that. As for the guy, nobody can draw perfect hands so who cares... and the feet are a little too pointy.. Maybe try adding a little perspective.. unless you know..he's suppose to be hung up on a wall or something Oh and awesome expression on his face.