I kind of dislike this one tbh. It's okay but not the best. The Star shines or whatever those lines in the BG are called are kinda old and i know they look cool but they are whored in like every vector LP possible.

The arrows bother me thatway too. I feel like arrows have become like a filler to make anything fit together with minimal work.
now now, before you start thinking he doesn't understand the concept. I do. The arrows are meaning for like new stages in your life and for every new stage theres a quote. ANd it just keeps going forward. However i think you should use less arrows for it, right now theres just a few too many of them, but then again i also just dont like using arrows in general so im biased.

I can't read like half the text and i don't know whether thats intentional or not. I would think you'd want me to read the important stuff like quotes from aristotle.

OVerall this is definetly a WIP and you definetly need to refine this a bit, but i really enjoy the concept of it. cool idea.