hmm this one is nice as always, although it doesn't depict and feel in any way Heavy Meta, taking into account the gender and what heavy metal is i dont feel it is related with heavy metal, to be honest with you, the background lines as in the lp of life i was doing they are pretty much outdated and way too overused.

overall its cool but for me at least it could be for anything but heavy metal the only thing that ties it to it is the heavy metal text =P the little vectorial (brushes/ or if they are done by you idk) also look way to pop to call them in a way. the end result looks good but doesnt taste that good for me

maybe rranging the color and some of the bg stuff might help thats just my opinion allthough i quite like it