HOKAI. FIRST: text is just... like... insanely... like... distracting. The effects are nice, I like the right side though the left the motion blurring is just comin' from no where. Lighting is ok, but you've got like 6 sources. The colors are nice but the blue is weird imo. The dots on the right side are a bit out of place since there's none on the left side and there's a lot on the right, though it looks pretty good on the right side. Nice job for a first try GO GO GO. mwaha. haha. hah.