no no no immo u r going the wrong way. Well i dont know about others but i think u are getting lazy to make tags and in turn making them worse. If i say directly its not the best of u. If i say exlplainatory, its looking too dull. the text is yucky(cant believe i m telling this to a master of text)
The c4d is showing too much and instead of cr8ting flow its cr8ting attraction, which the render should have done lol.
If you ask me, its like a newbie designer made that sig adding all the purple gradients,
I must say u are really addicted to purple and that too a dull one.