Music sig REMAKE!

[Newton]

i added some things to my SOTW entry.......tell me if its any better:

Old:

Remake:

and what do u exactly get for winning SOTW?!?!?

[Metal1]

ye its better and the prize is the satisfaction of winning.

[Newton]

hahahah lol that wat i thought

[Scrib]

you also get to pik the next sotw's theme

[Newton]

o thats pretty cool but it may be to much pressure on me to pick if i ever win lol

[Newton]

ok lol..........

[Papa]

you would also get your name in the hall of fame...but that hasnt been up-to-date in months. Maybe i'll re-update it soon.

Anyway- text isnt bad. A few things to watch out for though:
The composition, i dont see any notice of composition. Move your render or to the side a bit the middle is just flat boring.

The colors are cool i like them.
But watch out because the effects are wayy over sharpened. the only thing you really want to sharpen is the render and maybe a couple effects around it.

the remake is much better, before it was wayy to chaotic. Still is a bit chaotic. I reccomend going through the layers and dleteing what isnt nessescary.