Man v2 is okay. but i gotta say the c4d doesnt blend in AT ALL. And you are just covering up the render. Overall it's pretty unapealing. Work on the coloring of the render and the emptiness of the rigth side. I hate when that happens, usually when its that empty like that there isn't anything you can do..i relly havent found a solution for it yet..

nice text though and effects arent bad.