new one

[spooner]

[Papa]

Technically theres nothign rly wrong with this. It's just rly busy. I like the color better.

Try and on down some of the effects. Also i reccomend some more contrast. try and add in some linear dodge glows or something cause right now it's kind of bland. it's rly a solid sig but overall just bland.

[Skatanic_]

i agree with papa on that one solid build and such just a bit busy and lacking that final luster

[SSSSK]

needs more that one colour, good flow, needs more lighting and something to slightly dstract or add to the focal

[spooner]

thank you