dude 2

[Jeff]

2:

1:

Collaboration. I colored a friend's sketch, basically.

Details: http://jsoosiah.deviantart.com/art/L...ndow-113709342

[Papa]

Nice jeff!!
The coloring on him is really cool tho i think his face may be a bit too pink in comparrison to that gray BG.
Also the BG is kind of weird i dont rly get it. is it supposed to be like rocks or something? It just looks weird especailly with the window there.

Not bad but the bg looks like a last minute addition fix it up a bit.

[Scrib]

Yea i'd agree there^

but yea awsome job man keep i up

[Samuel]

Wicked. Would like to see the sketch, if that would ok =)

Looks awesome. Good work.

[Jeff]

thanks.

papa - It's just a wall with a window. I think that much should be clear, but I admit the window is kinda floating and doesn't seem integrated well enough. It gave me some trouble, but I'll see what I can do.

sam - sure.

[Samuel]

Awesome. Captured the sketch nicely.

I think a more gloomy feel to this could be great aswell. Like in a prison type deal. Have him sitting against the wall with a spotlight on him, making everything else dark and gloomy.

Just my idea! =P Awesome work man.


One critique. His pinkie finger looks very strange....=(

[Daemon]

Good job jeff, i like how the nicely you traced and painted this sketch I really enjoy the hair so nice color and use of highlights there. And the eyes is just amazing love them. The window however looks kinda un realistic and like just painted on top of everything else rather than in the wall.

I disagree with papa i really like the skin colors and i also like that the wall behind him is so simple a little thing to do perhaps is at the where the walls meed maybe draw a tiny shadow instead of that straight line not a huge one just a very tine one i think it would make it better.

Over all good job.

[Jeff]

Thanks for the suggestions. I've updated accordingly--improved the background and fixed the pinky finger.

[KidBuu]

thats a really good job jeff
and the 2nd oneis awesome, w8 thats the first one
oh oh
the one numbered "2" is gr8 one.

[ratchetnclank]

Nice job jeff