SpaceArt

[Sinus]

Hey everyone,
longtime huh?
Recently was working on spaceart.This is my 1st one,so would be great if you give me any tips.Hope you like it.

[Garis]

Pretty nice one ;]
it looks good as your first one.
but I should say that star is a bit odd.
too light for space imo.
and low quality.
and I dont know about meteorities.
but overall its good stuff

[Sinus]

darn,I used topaz but looks like I failed.
what star are you talking about?
In the centre there's nebula :?

[Heepsy]

im just gunna ask, do you have any tuts on how u made this, or do you know any tuts that will explain how you did it?

I really like it! Nice Work

[Sinus]

yea,I have some tuts but just how to make planet,nebula,starfield and everyhting else.but placement and etc made by myself.

Okay,I tried to correct it a little bit and now I'm confused.I don't know, do I got it worse or made it better?

[Papa]

This is not bad!
A few crits though, First of all the planets are a bit lacking in texture, and i'd rly like to see a bit more on there especially in the first planet. It's just a bit flat and kind of lacking.

The space cloud is a bit weird, it looks like a cloud from our atmosphere, which isn't exactly how ti looks in space..i dont think? lol. i dunno usually i just model my space art off my vision of space, which comes mostly from other space art. Pretty sad right? Anyway i just think that cloud is a bit too think +textureless. next time i reccomend you check out:
http://gallery.artofgregmartin.com/t...tar_field.html

you dont have to follow it, just check out how he textures his clouds. i think it might help you out a bit.

Finally those asteroids are great, but i would liek to see them shooting ino the picture instead of out of. it makes it better dynamicly (leads oyur eye into the frame, rather than out).
overall very good peice, i would just work on textures mainly.

[Sinus]

Sick link man and thanks for the tips.I think they will really help me next time.Cheers!

[Ptka]

I love that sun in the top right corner, that makes it a very strong piece.
I'm not so sure about the meteors, they look odd.
Also, the planet on the bottom right corner looks very texture-less.
It needs some rocky surfaces so it doesn't seem so smooth.
I love the text that says Space Art however, the colour is very cool.
Doesn't really fit with the rest of the piece but it's a good colour combination.

[*Peng*]

not bad for a first..but for me the nebula in the centre is far to bright it overpowers the rest