Ok so my friend likes the film finding nemo, and her nickname is Dori (the dopey fish) She wanted a tag for a forum shes on, so these are what i have made so far, im not done with it yet, going to put something at the bottom of the render to make it flow/blend a little better.

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v2:



Havent put text on them just yet, anyone have any suggestions on how to improve either of them abit? and which do you guys prefer?