Lakeside Fantasies

[Studhorse]

[Ptka]

It's not bad, although I don't really see whats going on.
Not very well pieced together in my opinion.
Love the text, but the rest isn't perfect.

[Studhorse]

actually it's pieced together very nicely.
Will post stock tomorrow.

although it may need some more work to convey the theme.
she is sitting in her bedroom day dreaming of the lake.
where the back wall would be is the lake scene.

i really like this one, i think what may need to be changed is maybe leaving some of the back wall in there or some kind of dissolve to convey the theme better.

[Tooms]

very cool manip. you should post stocks

[Studhorse]

Ok, based on theme I laid out previously, I changed it some to convey the idea better (hopefully?)

So this is what I came up this time:



and these are the 2 stocks I used:

[Studhorse]

improvement? no improvement?

[Ptka]

I think the second one is an improvement, the first one I just didn't see it.
Something about that teddy bear seems off though.
Maybe a bit of blending on that.

[KidBuu]

well idk although u said they are nicely pieced together i dont think so,
u have shadowed too much especially that teddy bear. the first thing i saw was that coz its popping out too much.
i like the concept though.
Btw i think its nice work coz manip in such a small area is hard.
GJ
keep it up