Good work, a few little things I noticed:

"The ground is quacking at my feet." quacking - duck, quaking - earthquake (I don't know if you meant one or the other, just pointing it out in case.)

"The sky is turning a fiery red blood color!" as this is it seems a bit awkward, you could fix it with changing 'fiery red blood color' to 'fiery blood red color.'

"The tide is turning, yet again, for another bend.
The time is nearing, for yet another end?"
^ this seems awkward to me, maybe eliminate 'yet again' to make it flow, this is just me being picky - all my opinion :P also the 'for yet another end?' imo could use an 'is it' right after the comma... that's, again, my opinion