wip-ish FF lp

[Miril]

Idk, ok, its like a sig style lp... like i did a sig and blew it up a lot.
C&C please, its not completely done but I'm kinda stuck.. :P

[Garis]

oho. loooks niCe ;]
I think text is in wrong place.
I would move it somewhere to the right.
And I dont know. maybe few pen tool lines around her.
Or some blue C4Ds.
You need something dramatic there. ;]
keep it up

[Fur]

very nice miril, I would move the text like garis said and add a lil more boom in it and you would have a very nice art work