Hmm. I'm not gonna like i hope this isn't you new minimalistic style. it's not bad, but it defently isn't minimalistic.

first of all the patterns on the face are cool and all but they totally ruin the focal, and they dont rly run with the bg much at all.
The text is okay but it is definelty the focal now. It's good text for the msot part but the white and the positioning makes it the first thing yu see, not the person.
If you get trid of the patterns it might help that.

The thing on the irght side need work, they kill the flow and the dynmanics. I'd drop them. Right now they keep drawing your eye off to the side.

Overall needs a bit mroe wrok, its a cool idea, but IMO a bit porr i execution. betetr luck next time.