Thanks for the comments.

I will do some work here and there on it, but I don't think it's my style really.. At the moment anyway.
It took me waay too long to make, I don't have a lot of free time, so I've been doing it over a period of 2 months.

What ruins it for me is that I started with no concept, and slapped the lyrics on as an afterthought 'cause they kinda suited.. not the best idea.