Sigs don't always need text so I wouldn't say the text is a bad point as there is none - you could try adding text to give more to look at - but it's not required.
First Sig.
This is better than the second, I feel the use of C4D works better here and the colours all fit quite well. The render isn't the best quality out there, either that or you have over sharpened it. Not bad composition however be ba careful with blending, the hands on the guy are rubbed out too much and this looks messy
Iron Man one.
Colours are all working nicely but I have this feeling that the sig looks empty, the C4D's ain't really doing much to either enhance the background or focal, they just seem to be there. Also seems slightly over sharpened. On the plus side you don't have loads of colours in it so it's all mixing nicely. Look like you have attempted lighting too and I can see that slowly coming too.
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