Burst Angel

[Lewk]

Cnc Kiddies?
Its not too small, yours are just too big.
Had trouble with the text. This is V3 BTW.

[Bob_magic]

Well at first look the text doesn't fit. you see it and it just looks like a purple blob upon the page.

aside from that it's a nice signature.
Dw, text is probably the hardest part of a signature. I often have trouble with text myself and end up leaving it out.

[Scrib]

yea text wastes it i wood just tick with (if i am correct) ur initials in the corner

[Lewk]

yus they are my initials

[Kanariya]

It's quite a nice sig, text is a bit iffy.
The render is making my brain melt, (not your fault) i don't know which was to look at it, what is it? aaah.

[Lewk]

bump.


sorry for old thread bumping, would like more feedback on this though

[Stiggeh]

I really like this one. The effects beside the focal are immense in my opinion and I love the colouring. My only problem with it would be the text as it is blended in too much. 8.5/10. Great work.

Maybe sharpen the focal a bit?