Quote Originally Posted by SSSSK View Post
his hair needs a better cutout, its a little empty for a lp, there are amazing efffects near the focal, the moon thing on the top right is all wrong, and doesnt fit, although the source of lighting you added was good
exactly my thoughts, i like your shapes and so on you really evolved since you started this style, but one think is still the same your cutout needs polishing dude xD those white dots all around in his hair ruins the entire expression because then you think hey looks pretty slick and then thinking but he is a bit lazy i know it can be an arse to sit and cut out so loong time but better do the piece over some coupple of days and getting the best result than rushing to fast.