Silent & Splinters collab

[cC.Aleksander]

Hey.
Me and splinter decided to do a collab.
Please tell us where we went wrong, what to do and wht's good

[MarkPancake]

Da birdy plane :P

[cC.ShorterGFX]

i like it. i hav no idea how to do these so [Please do not rate unless asked to]

[Chris]

Unfortunately, the bird is really low quality, and that hurts it more than anything. The additions could have been meshed a little bit better against it, but unless you're using gradient maps, you're gonna have trouble conveying a rough surface, like feathers, underneath or through a logo or emblem.

Another thing I noticed was the right wing looks ALOT longer than the left. I guess the length came from the length of the plane wing, which is understandable, but if you stand back and glance at it taking in the perspective, they seem off. They also seem to be at different angles...

The other thing was the typo. I'm not sure what I can say to improve it, but I think it could have been incorporated a little bit differently.

Other than those things, nice concept and nice job. I like how you went with the idea, and produced a fairly respectable result. Congrats guys.

[MarkPancake]

Yeah the plane wing was hard to get into a good size comparison, but thanks anyways. We'll probably work on it now

[cC.Midway]

lol, i like it bird plane

[Fork]

The parts could have been blended better.

[Bob_magic]

It's a cool idea but it really isn't killing it for me.
It looks like you had the idea, but you rushed it.
The picture is quite low quality to begin with. and at first glance it looks like a bird with a square wing.

Now if you'd incorporated and engine on the regularly shaped bird wing i think it might've worked better.

but that's just me.

[bluesgurl]

Looks pretty cool but isn't it weird for a bird to have two different types of wings? LIke the idea though.

[navb01]

yeah maybe use a picture of higher quality!