Rating 1/10
Honestly as harsh as that sounds, it's true. Don't take it the wrong way, you can improve massively with a bit of practice. I know i have.
The whole thing is stretched and blurry, colours are monotonus, the text is barely readble too.
Try some of our wide range of tutorials here on the void.
Myself,papa,daemon and immortal have wrote some really clear and easy to follow ones, give them a try.