Quote Originally Posted by Hind View Post
Hmmm, I dunno man. I think you could have blended this better. Unless you were going for that whole dissolving effect. If you were, you should make the transition smoother. Text is cool. A little hard to read though.

I'd prefer this without the stripes. You could fill up the space using C4Ds, unless you're going for a simple and plain look, which isn't too bad imo. Just that, superheroes don't quite suit the simple and plain look kinda thing, if you get what I mean? Lol

Other than that, this is pretty good. Overall, I think I would quite like it without the stripes and a smoother transition for the dissolving effect.
Hit the nail on the head.

The text is good, but hard to read. I'd suggest trying a clipping mask, see how it turns out.

V2 looks much better, but it feels somewhat empty in the bottom corners. Try darkening them a little or filling it up a bit.