This has alot of flaws. Mainly being the foreground and background areas. For example on the hand we can see half of (right side) half of it's covered up, although that is supposed to be in the foreground, yet it's covered up. And the parts behind that aren't covered up (her dress mainly). Also you can see the eraser lines very clearly, work on those more. Nice job on it but I don't know, perhaps if you'd made some of the C4Ds it would've been more intriguing.