Devils Trench

[BonesMa]

I realy enjoyed doing this manip and it was something different for me.

Stock:-

Waterfall
http://kangrstock.deviantart.com/art/Niagara-1-75152160

Islands
http://meihua-stock.deviantart.com/a...d-1-2-62499768

Sky
http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1161670

Birds
http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1161670

A lot of adjustments went into this manip and in many ways is my largest piece to date.

Devaintart Page:-
http://bonesma.deviantart.com/art/De...ench-122155584

Resized PB image:-



Thanks for any comments and such.

Now to finish off all the WIPs I have in my head.

[paulcage]

it's nice work but islands file could not be found and you mentioned same link for the sky and the birds. good adjustments though.

[BonesMa]

thanks

does this link not work?

http://meihua-stock.deviantart.com/a...d-1-2-62499768

[ratchetnclank]

the rock in the center looks too pasted on, it needs water crashing onto it with splashes and stuff at the edges, the lightining also seems off on the whole piece to me.


Nice idea, needs better execution.

[Lewk]

the rock in the center looks too pasted on, it needs water crashing onto it with splashes and stuff at the edges, the lightining also seems off on the whole piece to me.


Nice idea, needs better execution.

What she said looks too pasted.

[KidBuu]

two pblms
one is as rachet told the island is looking too artificial
second the lighting is totally different above the fall and below the fall lol
the concept is nice though GJ

[Helix]

imo the island needs to be moved away from the cliff more.. is it supposed to look like it's floating? Imo move it to the left and down so it gives it the right perspective. or just remove it entirely.. the rest is tight.. you could also add some 'spray' from the water to make it look like it's more part of the image.. some fog or whatever in front of it

[BonesMa]

Thanks for all the comments yeah ill work on it some more.