Ok, that border thing, has to go. If you're gonna have the Lotus logo in your background, you wouldn't want that horrid border to block it out of view. It also takes the attention away from your main focal. The car.
I've got a feeling that this would look good if it was more simple. Bring the Lotus logo nearer to the center and closer to the car, you wouldn't want your focal to be at two different places. Then, maybe a nice background behind the Lotus logo, and a change of text (complete change though) and I think it'll be good to go. Overall, nice attempt, I like your concept. Work on executing it better.![]()