Bumblebee

[Ballinfolyf131]

well i made this while i was watching the movie. i think I finally got some decent text on it too. CnC.

[Ballinfolyf131]

no comments?

[Dom]

It's pretty good. The effects are a bit too wild for me and the top is really empty. The render is also small so it's hard to see the detail on his face. Nice attempt though, keep it up.

[Ptka]

I shall comment!
The C4D's are not bad, but the background is just too boring.
Find another stock to put the render on.
Text text is alright, and it's quite subtle which is good.
Just keep trying, add more effects and a decent background.

[Ballinfolyf131]

thanks fellas. i will work on it and post it up again. Ptka what kinda stock you thinking?

[Ptka]

Well, I haven't seen Transformers, but maybe a destroyed city? Burning buildings? Things like that.

[Ballinfolyf131]

good thinking. thanks.