Whaaaaaaat?! No gift for me??
And I always give the most detailed critique too...

Rofl, on topic - I think the last coloured version is the best. Looks great with the fonts switched around, and now that you've taken my advice and removed that dissolve effect, that debris effect doesn't seem too overused anymore. Yeah, I feel good about that left side too. Like I said before, the emptiness kind of works in this. It puts more emphasis on the flow of that debris effect.