Infamous

[cC.ShorterGFX]

And By the way i didnt use kidbuu's tut

[zole]

Effects are nice and the text is ok, i can kinda see an outline on the render there :S kinda makes it lq and i think the effects are lq :S lol get rid of that big line goin through him near his chin on the left and try and be more exciting with the Infamous text maybe tone down the lighting to the right and add a little colour into it, maybe add a couple more gradient maps and photo filters overall nice job

[Ptka]

If those odd lines were a bit smoother and the light source wasn't as large, this would be very very good.
The colours work well, but the effects don't have much flow.
I also don't really like the text, you could make that a bit more transparent.

[cC.ShorterGFX]

oh ok thanks