Abstract

[gonhop]

Newest one, no smudging or brushing.
C&C please!
Edit: Woops, wrong name :P


V2 (with smaller, less eye-catching text):


V3:


V4:

[DoubleForte]

personally I like the first most. The only real nitpick is that tonal grid along the bottom throws my focus off of the cherry thing.

[Ptka]

Looks good, but it would be much better as a full smudge sig.
Make sure that if you are doing something abstract and blurry, that it doesn't have any sharper areas or else those become unwanted focal points.