Freedom

[Active.]

Okay another sig from me today.

V1:


V2:


V3:


V4:


CnC please!

[DeadlesS]

v.2 is sweet...
the only thing to point is that the blueish thing drives me away from the focal..
try to lighten up the focal a bit...

[Active.]

okay i put a omni lighting effect on the focal, but i couldnt do too much because it looses some of the quality... :/ Cheers for the comment anyway.

[cC.DOMINO™]

lose the blue imo, v4 is best also for lighting, just that blue fucs it all up for me. other than that its a nice compo and depth good job, also not too keen on the dissolve dots on the right side, it kinda seems odd imo. maybe add some color to the cigarette if u gonna have some color.

[Ptka]

I really like the blue actually, otherwise this would just be a regular sig.
Change up the text, and just go for a simple border, it's too complicated to use white and black.
If I were you, I would consider placing another blue portion somewhere on the left side to balance it out.

[SSSSK]

needs sharpening

[DoubleForte]

I like V4, but the border bothers me.