Good points : Colouring is nice, effects are good, and quite good use of clipping masks. Text is okayy, could be better.
Bad points : BG is slightly boring, and not too keen on the patterned lines. The focal needs to be brighter, or just the centre really. The effects have light, but the focal is darkened. . The white border isn't effective, I would either have no border or two black lines down the either side.