Storm

[.fonz]

So I'm kinda stuck on this, I've been messing around with it but I just can't fill up the left side without making it seem like i forced it. I also know I need to move the light source a bit to the right or the girl to the left but other than that help me out with how I can fill it up a bit more plz! Then I'll keep you updated and post the final.

Thanks already

UPDATE :


Here's the new one with border:



one without border (I prefer w/o)



and black and white but that didnt turn out too well imo.