not bad for first vert, the focal is a little messy, clean up the face part, also the depth of the bg is hard to determine with it so blurry like that. sharpen closer bg areas, and blur further back areas for better depth, try addin on new version of the original stock sharpen a little and then erase areas that are far away progressively. then do the same thing but backwards with a blurred version of the original stock. also might want to erase some of that c4d there, it looks like a blob of c4d and not really part of the design. good for first vert tho kiu. also RIP Michael.