Still waaaay too big and its incredibly noicey. My advice to start with is to make you beginning canvas about 400pix by 200pix and work around that and only go smaller. I personally try to work in as close to 400 by 140 as possible cos its a good size for forums. As i said before the entire sig is too noicy. The background doesn't look too bad but its quite chaotic and doesn't really fit with the render. Did you use Garris' text tut? my advice with text is leave it alone for a while. Wait till you're really happy with the actual Art then start adding text and only when you think it applies. Text doesn't have to go into everything as Signatures are pretty much an art form even if they rnt dignified as one. Your render needs to be blended and the flow using the fractles needs to be another 20 degrees or so to the right.