hatethisone

[Joekz]

but ill post it anyways : /

[tzp]

I like the concept. I like from the mouth to the Y in creativity. The rest of it is just a bit piecemeal for me. Great effort though.

[Dom]

It's not bad, I like the concept you were going for. A lot of black in the tag though.
In places it looks a little pixelated (might just be the computer screen). I like the flow from the mouth but as tzp said the rest of the effects are the "y" from "Creativity" it's pretty un-effectfull and pointless. Maybe you could try cropping it.
A nice effort though, keep it up.