it looks good to a point.. What you need to work on is your flow of the sig.. Place your c4d with the flow of your render a little blending in.. The bg colors dont work well with your render.. Follow some more tutotials and get your basics down first then work on c4d placement.Try and make your sigs a little larger.. majority on what i use is 400 x 150 .. Most will say 350-375 x 125-150.. Nice effort .. Keep working on it..