text is weird to look at o.o makes me look like a crossed eye dog man. simple text ftw.

ur skill is obviously improving. i like the way u organized the effects to have that certain "hey look at me flow". only thing that bothers me is the blue color. looks quite dull honestly, its just there :\ spice that up a notch BAM. : >

background is cool especially the right side. extend that style a bit.

good work