Thanks everyone for the incredible feedback
i just have some questions, i have tried like 100 tuts on text but still i fail hardcore in it. So any suggestions/tips are appreciated on how to improve my text.

Jice, you said that i needed to increase my depth, well i have some questions about that also.
How exactly would you personally think how to do that? please provide some detailed information so i know how to improve my sigs greatly in the future

thanks in advance!