blueflare dont say stuff like that
sorry hyggan but it needs work
these pointers are suppose to help you not be a bad critique
1. right now your gun is your focal point i cant even see the guy
2. its all red, there is no orange blueflare its just monotone
3. it looks like u got someones c4d and put it as the background which is bad in my oppinion it doesnt blend with the render at all
4. flow? i dont see it i just see a render on a background with some red photo filters maybe
just work with those mistakes
try using c4ds to blend with your focal in stead of using them as a background alot of people do what u just did but i think it looks trashy
nice try though...