lines over her face and arm shouldn't be there imo. it realy makes the focal ugly. some lines at the edges of a tag is more then enough to accent the flow and also much more subtile. the pink/orange line on top off neck off the guitar is transparant and that makes it look as if it shoud not be there, so i'dd erase that. font is nice but text looks just slapped on. i would place it behind the lines. just some comments, but overall a very nice sig.