whats with the red dot on the top left corner, remove it, distraction to me. The focal point well... its not very good as not really much action is going on and even if u r to find a 'no action' focal, this really fail. Well, all these comments are IMO. And, make it brighter a little bit. Making a sig dark does not always cre8 depth.

If you are to make a tag with depth, this is what i sometimes do.

Create a new layer>apply image
Gaussion BLur by #(personal choice, the blurrer it is, the darker the sig)
Then set the layer to multiply.
Use a eraser of 25%-50% opacity to erase the focal.

Actually, i dun nid to tell u this tho... But juz to make u improve ^_^

Good job