i like the concept, but i dont like the render or the blue dot in his hand, i understand what the blue dot is suppose to be, but i just dont care for it to much. Good effects on the c4ds. I will have to disagree with Xeno, i do not like the text. Try to blend it alittle better, and place it in a more suitable location. Also turn the text back to normal, i dont like the whole sideways thing. Good depth