T-shirt design

[Ballinfolyf131]

Whats up this is a random t-shirt design i came up with, i havent posted here in a while so i figured i would.

Sorry if this is the wrong section, i didnt really see a better choice.

[-MM.Kritez]

pretty neat man.

i dont like the back text (outter glow=ew)

i would personally reduce the colors a bit, they are alittle strong for my taste.

overall really cool man, gj

[+s9.Oath]

looks very very nice man i would wear it everywhere

[excellence]

the colors are nice, but i dont like the design of it, the shape is funky

[Scrib]

I would buy that, nice to see someone doing something different other than signatures or wallpapers. Your colours are coming across very strong, reduce the brightness a tad. The back text is noit needed, it takes away from the design and gives the idea the person wearing it is part of a club called "Abstract" or something along those lines. The overall design is pretty solid and I would say pretty appealing to teenagers. I would take away the trinity studios part on the front also and maybe add another shape?

I like it, nice work, just a few tweaks and you're onto a winner. Just out of interest what market did you create it for?