no 1: verry messy, clean up the focal, text in the flow direktion does not work. same goes for the colored borders. black borders works best.

no 2: to blurry to chaotic. nice text and font. lacks flow, but it is better then no 1. If you sharpen up little bits you obtain much more depth. i like the way you worked with the color. maybe (partional) red text?? certanly has potential this one