Too big for a sig size and i dun like the effects, it just dun go wif flow man. the effects are slapped in just like tat. read more tuts dude... understand concepts that are needed. u said u wanna be good. so have to work harder!

Now i will explain the problem of this sig to u again, in a more understanding manner

1) Signature Size is too big

2) Render/Focal is not blended in well enough

3) Effects are just slapped in there.

4) No flow

Sry mate for the harsh comments