Spray!

[starwar]

I was willing toadd the spray effect but beig a begineer i could not attempt for it as i thought it will disturb my other space



may be anyone from u want to try it so here is the original render
would be willing to look at ur work

[rewritable]

Whoa! The lines are quite a win.

Flow is good (except for those few swirly white lines in background over his elbow, they are perpendicular to flow and should be tilted a bit to left, try Filter-Liquify and brush them to a side).

I like the way light is used together with effects and blending.

Not sure about the colors.

Overall really nice. One of your best.

[starwar]

thanks mate, thats really encouraging
at least i can have my si now . yeah will def update it.

[-MM.Kritez]

your getting better man, the flow is great with the lines going around his arms.

what i dont like about this is the colors. when i look at the render you used, there is really no orange, but your entire sig is bright and orange. you need to create more contrast and depth with your colors (use colors that complement each other, or contrast each other).

good work man, keep it up

[Xelo]

Most is said already, but i would like to compliment on this one. The lines are superb!!
Where did you get them from? LOL i'd love to have a go at this render.. good work mate!!

[starwar]

thanks for the cooments
@Kritez; I dont get it then wt is orange
@ Xelo search with "10_Scan_Line_Brushes_by_PAULW.abr" and u will get teh stuff

[Epiph]

the lines are a nice touch, but the white blotch under the guy's arm and near his abdomen is distracting.

[1LastHope]

Nice effort M8! Not sure about the line over the arm and I'd keep the flow going left to rt.
KiU.